User:Aierz/Chinese ideals of female beauty/NatalieCampbell Peer Review

General info

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the article is coming along nicely, I think it would be good to do some edits on titles such as adding proper capitalization and also adding sub categories rather then new sections for every topic, otherwise great job so far.