User:Aikedumanwen/Israel–Nigeria relations/Jnordhoff13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aikedumanwen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aikedumanwen/Israel%E2%80%93Nigeria_relations?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Israel–Nigeria relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I can tell, your major contribution to the article is the chart providing statistics/details for each country. This chart is helpful in contextualizing the relations. I especially liked how you included the Gini Coefficient to give an idea of inequality.

I'm not sure if you just haven't had the time, but I couldn't really find other places where you have augmented the existing article. I would encourage you to put some time into researching and expand upon the written information! To help in that process, here are some areas from the existing article that might be most helpful to expand upon:

- the lead could give a very brief historical overview of the trend in relations (i.e. "In the early 1900's, relations looked like this. After the 1960's, they changed to this. Now, they tend to look like this")

- provide more detail on the Yom Kippur war and how it pushed Nigeria to sever ties. This seems to be a major shift point in the relations.

- the next date that appears in 1993. What occurred in between 1973 and 1993 that allowed relations to build up again?

- the 2013 visit of Nigerian prime minister to Israel would be a good place for a photo!

- it seems that there is probably more context for current relations than just the story of Nigerian solidarity during the kidnapping of Israel teens in 2014

Perhaps, once you add more information, an interesting way to divide sub-sections might be by industry/form of relation. For example, there is already a lot of existing information in the article about crossover of business interests and ventures between the two countries... that could be interesting to highlight. Another form of relation might be official government visits or documents.

I'm excited to see the final result of this page! Keep working!