User:Ailano/Geriatrics/FlavumTown Peer Review

General info
Ailano, Alilovescats, DarkKnight05
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)