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Article evaluation


 * everything in the article is relevant but not broad enough.


 * examples and the process of transnationality can be added.
 * the definition of the term transnationality, other related terms and the writing style can be improved
 * an argument of transnationality can be included in the article.
 * the article is a stub
 * there is no information from a reliable source and no citations just a plane and narrow definition of transnationality
 * there is no discussion about this article in the talk section yet.

PEER REVIEW
Hi Arnold

Firstly, I want to commend you for your good work in your wiki project ‘’the global south’’, you have done an excellent work in analyzing your article. I can see in your work that you have being able to identify the ambiguity in the definition of the term ‘’Global South’’ and you have the intention of making it simple, and you have been able to locate some incorrect referencing which show your attentiveness to your work and also you have decided to expand the existing topic with more information from reliable sources which is a very good move. However, in simplifying  the term global south be careful so you don’t lose focus of its true meaning, and the terms you mention that supports this article should be related, for example colonialism is a key concept that can be use in explaining the term global south because is a concept that can tell the historical background of the global south countries which is an encounter between the wealthy north countries and the global south countries. the event that tells the impact (negative and positive) of the northern rich countries in the global south both present, past, and future should be included. Nevertheless politics, ideology and economy of the global south countries as you mention are delicate in this topic and they can be use in explaining the reason why the global south countries are developing countries and how they affect each other like politics in general affecting the ideology and economy of the global south countries vice versa. in the existing article I can see there is a debate going on the relevant of the term global south and I believe more information can be added in the debate section. the African libraries should have some reliable and relevant information, if Africa is going to be use as a case study. Lastly, I want to say your work is excellent and keep the good work. Good luck!