User:Ainsleyeross/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Conducting

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am taking a conducting class and have experience and knowledge with conducting. I am very interested in it as well.

Evaluate the article
There is a great introductory sentence in the lead for this article that clearly describes what conducting is and when it is used. I link that it is a shorter sentence as well, which quickly gets the reader the information they are looking for. It seems that the links work, and redirect the reader to helpful supporting articles. There are many sections such as history and technique that further describe conducting in an organized manner. Within these sections, this article has subsections to further organize the information on this page. Each visual is not only supported by the text surrounding it, but includes a description box below the visual to help the reader better understand what they are viewing. My one critique that I would add, would be to include more in-text citation. Some sections do a great job of this but others seem to be lacking. I also think that some visuals that are used don't seem to have very much purpose. I would remove those visuals and instead add more that support and enhance the text.