User:Ainsleymacdougal/Memphis soul/Emmalauren19 Peer Review

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(provide username) AinsleyMacdougal


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very good and detailed. Gives a great preview of the work you've done and I am really impressed with how much you've provided.

Content is up to date and supported by sources.

Tone is good. Nothing in your witting sounds biased or comes off the wrong way.

Sources are good and provide evidence to the information you are talking about.

Well written and easy to read and like i said before I am so impressed by this.

No pictures

You could add some more sources but the ones you have provided work!

This is a very good start to an article and you did some very good work. I would just suggest to give some more background info and continue adding small things and sources.

Great job