User:Aiolamichael/History of immigration to the United States/Datster504 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aiolamichael


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aiolamichael/History_of_immigration_to_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I found the article to be quite detail rich. However there were some things that did not go well with the article. For starters, the introduction read like it was a group project, which it is, but the article will be posted as a Wikipedia article so it is not necessary that it details what person will be talking about specific topics. Thing that i did find to be good about the article was that it was very detailed as i previously mentioned. Also sources were properly used taking the reader to where the information was gathered. I found that the article was well written and the information that was provided was accurate.