User:Aiqin314/Oregon Iron Company Furnace/Dahlman, Steven A. Peer Review

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Overall a good article. Might want to try and restructure the first sentence it seems a little cumbersome, you might try something like this;

"The Oregon Iron Company Furnace, or Oswego Iron Furnace, is an iron furnace located in Oregon's George Rogers Park, near Lake Oswego that was created by the Oregon Iron Company ."

Might also add in your lead section when this furnace was built.

You might also add a section describing the physical characteristics and dimensions of the furnace as well as the materials used to make it that is separate from your section about the history of the company.

Overall an informative and well made article.