User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Alexcrocker12345 Peer Review

This article did a good job of clearly explaining what prenatal stress is and what can cause it. Under conducting research there was no evidence the show stress could impact the fetus it had no statistics on this type of research. Also had too many studies but no statistical evidence to back them up. The next section Timing of prenatal stress and its impact on development had a good example and gave some statistical divide base on that research. When it was talking about pups in this article I was not sure what kinda of pups or animals they were trying to say. Overall it did get the point across.

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