User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Blazer GB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajaslay


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good work so far! Its really well done, easy to read and follow. There are only two things that I would suggest. First is the the last sentence of the introduction seems like it would create more questions for the layperson than it would answer. Like, What is epigenetics? What is fetal programming? I would suggest hyperlinking those to their wiki article like is done in the previous sentence for cognitive development, low birth weight, etc. My second suggestion has to do with the "impact on development" section, while it is done really well. It appears to only have two sources at the moment, I would suggest adding a few more as it would then represent more of the current understanding on the topic. Overall, good job!