User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Melboun Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajaslay

Kmb24

Kayliah01

Holland1801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prenatal stress

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi everyone,

I have read your sandbox draft about prenatal stress and I am seeing that you are adding more info on impacts of prenatal stress. The additions are very relevant to your article and I think they do fit well in that section. I will say that there is a spelling error in the last sentence you added to the introduction. I assume you are referring to "epigenetics" as in the field of study. I would also like to mention that I think the wording in the "Impact on Development" section could be a little more specific. For example, when you wrote "outside factors", which factors exactly? Or "many different areas" - which parts of the brain exactly? I personally understand what you are saying, but for someone who doesn't know anything at all about this topic, they may not exactly follow what you are trying to convey.

Overall, great start!

Thank you for your advice. I will list some outside factors. I fixed the spelling error in the first paragraph. -Kayliah