User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Mhlooney Peer Review

I recommend elaborating on the "Prenatal Stress and Gender Roles" section as well as the health risks in the Lead section.

The Lead/Introduction concisely and clearly describes the article's topic and contains a proper introductory sentence. It also summarizes the "Impact on Development" paragraph immediately below it. The Lead seems to be concise and contains information in the article. Content is relevant to the topic. Good work so far.

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