User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Noorchaudhryy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajaslay/Prenatal_stress?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
The introductory sentence clearly and concisely defines prenatal stress. I like how there is immediately a source for this content and hyperlinks within the sentence defining other terms which may not b familiar to all readers. The content in the introduction is overall very accessible. The last sentence feels somewhat random to me. Defining "fetal programming" would be good. Perhaps a link to a Wikipedia page about fetal programming would be wise as well. It feels out of place to me, the reader.

Content
The content added thus far is relevant and up-to-date, but it does feel random. This is more likely because the rest of the content has not been added yet. Besides that, the content about "Impact of Development" does feel useful with regard to prenatal stress. Other sections must be added, such as a sections on each specific impact, if possible.

Tone and Balance
Thus far, everything is neutral. It will be tricky staying neutral further into this topic because different scientists have differing opinions on what specifically causes tress and what the effects are. Effects vary from fetus to fetus, so this must be disclosed. Additionally, it must be disclosed if an opinion is that of a scientist. This is to make sure a Wikipedia reader of this article does not think the opinions are that of the writer of this article.

Sources and References
A very impressive amount of sources have been added to this article thus far. All sources are reputable and appropriate for the content which they address within the article. Great work on this!

Organization
Thus far, the organization is decent. This section can be better assessed once more content is added. When more content is added, please make sure the subtopics within this article flow well. It is easy for a reader to get confused when the subtopics are randomly inserted. Everything needs to have a true purpose for being added in a specific place.

Images and Media
No images nor media have been added thus far. Images and media make the page more engaging and less intimidating for readers. One image that could be added may be of a popular scientist studying prenatal stress perhaps. Just an idea.

Great work!

Thank you for your advice. I tried to add images, however I can't; it's stating that only the administrator can do that. I will add what is fetal programming in the beginning. -Kayliah