User:Ajaslay/Prenatal stress/Octhrift Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

user: Ajaslay


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prenatal stress
 * Prenatal stress

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is very detailed based on what I can see. There were a few grammatical errors within the article that can be corrected. The way the information is being presented could be a little more organized. For example, in the lead paragraph there were some things mentioned that can cause prenatal stress and therefore cause issues for the developing child. This could be explained or summed up better or in more of a clear way.

Thank you for your advice. I will go through and fixed the grammar errors that are still there. -Kayliah