User:Ajb321/Rapport/Brianne.04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajb321


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajb321/Rapport?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rapport

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe you chose an interesting article topic to focus on this semester. After reviewing your edits, I found your resources to be relevant to your topic. Each resource proves how rapport is built and  provides different examples of where. To further your edits, I suggest for you to possibly discuss how long it could take to build rapport and what that entails. Or you could mention how the time to build rapport differs based on each case.

Also, when reading the article I noticed the “Benefits” section goes into different domains, such as healthcare, education, and negotiation. However, I believe there should be a concise introduction paragraph that describes the overall benefits of rapport regardless of the specific domain. Then, It could transition into “Rapport benefits differ by the domain:” and go into the specifics. Just a suggestion!