User:Ajb321/Rapport/Michgonza123 Peer Review

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 * Peer review 2 User:Ajb321/Rapport Hello there, I am reviewing your article on Rapport. This is my second report on your article and I have to say it again, you have done a wonderful job. Constructing your article is not easy but you have made it look as so. I see from when we last read your article that there is now a photo attached. The photo is a great add to the article and it makes it all come together as a whole. I believe the photo that you chose was a great example of the article and what you were trying to pronounced us into what it was about before we even got to reading. I am big on photos, because it was you see at first glance, it sets the tone. Your tone is easy to read. The caption attached to the photo could have been a little more detailed and original. It was straight to the point but I feel you could have done something a little more advanced. Again you did a great job this week, I can not wait to see the final product as the days come closer to submitting the final one to wikipedia. Good luck to you.
 * Peer review 2 User:Ajb321/Rapport Hello there, I am reviewing your article on Rapport. This is my second report on your article and I have to say it again, you have done a wonderful job. Constructing your article is not easy but you have made it look as so. I see from when we last read your article that there is now a photo attached. The photo is a great add to the article and it makes it all come together as a whole. I believe the photo that you chose was a great example of the article and what you were trying to pronounced us into what it was about before we even got to reading. I am big on photos, because it was you see at first glance, it sets the tone. Your tone is easy to read. The caption attached to the photo could have been a little more detailed and original. It was straight to the point but I feel you could have done something a little more advanced. Again you did a great job this week, I can not wait to see the final product as the days come closer to submitting the final one to wikipedia. Good luck to you.
 * Peer review 2 User:Ajb321/Rapport Hello there, I am reviewing your article on Rapport. This is my second report on your article and I have to say it again, you have done a wonderful job. Constructing your article is not easy but you have made it look as so. I see from when we last read your article that there is now a photo attached. The photo is a great add to the article and it makes it all come together as a whole. I believe the photo that you chose was a great example of the article and what you were trying to pronounced us into what it was about before we even got to reading. I am big on photos, because it was you see at first glance, it sets the tone. Your tone is easy to read. The caption attached to the photo could have been a little more detailed and original. It was straight to the point but I feel you could have done something a little more advanced. Again you did a great job this week, I can not wait to see the final product as the days come closer to submitting the final one to wikipedia. Good luck to you.