User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Angelina3000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
When I'm looking at your draft I see your first sentence with a reference and them under that I see a quote with no citation. Since it is early in the project, I'm assuming that the quote is just extra information that you are wanting to use but I believe that with the quote there should also be a citation added just for you to be able to remember where that quote came from. Other than that the beginning sentence is well written and explains the definition of the theory