User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/ChrisDeClou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09, Mylesmegna10, AliyaSantiago, Woodyedwards


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is pretty early to peer review this article because we have not done much as far as explaining what our theories are; however, since there is so little that has been written, we can discuss sources. Your page has two different definitions of Positive Deviance, but only one source has been referenced.The second, larger definition of the two carries a quote, but no source. Make sure that if you pull information from somewhere else, it gets cited and referenced so that one does not get falsely accused of cheating. The larger definition, however, does give a more thorough description of what positive deviance is. I would use this as an introduction to what your article will be about. One thing that i will take away from this article so far and add to my own is having a more descriptive definition of what Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies is.