User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Dominic D928 Peer Review

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Hello. I just did a peer review of your article and I will say that the sources you have are good. Definitely need more substance in terms of the bulk of the article. Also, the size of the words are a bit large. I don't know if that is just how it is for me or not. So editing of that may need to take place. There is also a lot of parts that are missing. I am sure these will be done by the time this article is due though.