User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/EllaRColley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am a little confused on this article, as it says the changes were made on December 27, 2021, which was well before the start of this class. Maybe it is a fluke?

I cannot tell if what I am reading is the lead or the article body. However, it does well in describing what positive deviance is. I assume it is the lead, and I think some more detail should be added to it. I think putting it in more common words may help to make the definition a bit easier to understand as well. Also, it is only 2 sentences long, so I would recommend adding some more details as to what it is, and maybe an example of it as well.