User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Hannahbella711 Peer Review

I like how you had the definition of Positive Deviance Approach clearly stated in the first sentence to start the article off. I would try to not use quotes though because I am pretty sure they just want you to say the information in your own words from reliable sources to back up those claims. I was a little confused on the second citation because I dont think its supposed to be there. The information also isn't sorted into any sort of header yet but this is a good start into writing your article.

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