User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Jennamaroney24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think having a clear layout of the concept when introducing it is a very good idea. It lays out exactly what the theory is and defines it quickly. I think here the definition should include a little more and be more in depth. I think a history and some key concepts are important too, to give more information on where the theory came from and also key points to know about the theory. I think a little more detail should be added.