User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/ManuelValeroUCF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Just on the information provided the information seems correct but are quotes. Try using these quotes and make a definition out of them in simpler terms for a easier grasp for readers. Also, you have put the quotes in section leading positions shown by the font and size which will need to be moved under these sections. You forgot to link the second quote to an article which will mark off points for plagiarism. Moving forward for a lead a simple who what when where and why would help stat the introduction to the page. The link also does not seem to connect to the one presented in the article reference so double check that it is both correct.