User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Martiniaudrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
My first impression was that the layout/ structure so far is a little confusing. Try exchanging the first quote at the top for a title! It also looks like the article only has quotes as of now, so I would take those out and rephrase them in your own words. The quotes are good starts though, and do lend a good idea to what Positive Deviance is and means. One of the sources is from Cognella, so from what I know it is reliable. The second source from "Better Evaluation" is a good start, but try only using textbooks and peer reviewed articles/ journals.