User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Sophiatroia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Positive Deviance approach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall: Since the other factors of the article have not been created yet I cannot comment on them, but I think the definition of the theory is a great place to start. I think the starting base line of saying it is a "study" sets the reader up for an idea of what the article will be focusing on, like a study. The link also works for the tagged article which is helpful to the reader. I would say keep up the work and maybe reword the definition when you put it into the Lead, so you can incorporate the tone and your own voice into the article! Good job.