User:Ajclough09/Positive Deviance Approach/Twetz02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajclough09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajclough09/Positive_Deviance_Approach?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Right idea with this article so far but needs more everything. If you choose to use a large quote I would suggest following it up with good elaboration. Likewise, a proper bibliography must be in place. Good start but not much to critique as it is a very small article.