User:Ajdel/Antiterrorism and Effective Death Penalty Act of 1996/Nharkdivad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajdel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajdel/Antiterrorism_and_Effective_Death_Penalty_Act_of_1996?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antiterrorism and Effective Death Penalty Act of 1996
 * Antiterrorism and Effective Death Penalty Act of 1996

Evaluate the drafted changes
In your draft provide some examples of what you would get rid of so that the intro isn't inflated with Habeus Corpus material. In the background section include some more details about the legislation and describe what the president supported about the bill. Include a timeline in the legislative history and lay what the articles you were going to use. Briefly describe what Title III is in the draft and how you will outline that section. I think subheadings in the Deportation and Capital Proceedings would make it easier to follow for the provisions you are going to have.