User:Ajlehrer/Lilith's Brood/NRobinson22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajlehrer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ajlehrer/Lilith's Brood


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lilith's Brood

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm not sure if you already moved your draft to the wikipedia article, so I'm not sure what to review.

Lead: The lead itself looking pretty good. It's straight to the point.

Content: The synopsis of each novel looks good, although I think "Imago (1989) could be a little bit longer.  Maybe one or two more paragraphs.

Tone and Balance: It feels like the synopsis of Imago incorporates an opinion, and the language could be a bit more neutral.

I appreciated the themes section. It's very detailed.

Overall, the article seems pretty well-organized and it's very straight forward. I've never heard of this series, but it's interesting and I just might have to add it to my reading list!