User:Ajohn319/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Relationships and Health

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am considering choosing to write on the potential effects of high-quality relationships on recovery from mental illness. This is an article that is close to that topic choice.

Evaluate the article
The lead section contains a general description of the observed interaction between relationships and health but does not provide an adequate outline of the topics discussed in the article. The article focuses on models relating relationships and health but does not mention so in the lead. The content is relevant and cites sources that are recent. However, this article is not neutral. There are portions of the article that speak in support of research and advocate for further developments. Not all facts or claims are supported by citations. The article is written in improper form for an informative piece. It makes arguments about the topic rather than presenting the information objectively. In regards to the image used, there is no caption provided to explain the image content. Moreover, while related to the topic, the image is not well-integrated into discussion of the topic. The talk page contains a joke presented as fact and no discussion of the quality of content provided in the article. Over all, this article needs adjustments to be made to tone and writing language. The many sources cited is a strength, but the arguments presented without citations should be removed. Images with proper captions should be used to visually reinforce ideas discussed in the article.