User:Ajp624/Live for Now/Madigwe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajp624


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajp624/Live_for_Now?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Live for Now

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The introductory sentence does a good job at giving a brief overview of what "Live for Now" was all about. The lead is very strong and gives the reader all the information that will be in the article. It goes over the reaction and the intention from Pepsi. I think the lead is great!

Content:

The content is all relative to the topic. All content is somewhat up to date considering this did happen a few years ago. I am not 100% sure if the Angry Birds and SNL skit need to have such large of a section. It is relevant to the topic but it could be shrunken down. I think it would be beneficial to add content on how the ad is received now/ the current updates on the Pepsi ad. I also think it would be beneficial to add more about how this affected Kendall Jenner and any statements she put out on this ad.

Tone and Balance:

This article is very neutral. I do not see any personal opinions, only facts. I do not see any claims that appear biased towards one side. No content is trying to persuade. I think the only thing that is underrepresented is some more information about Kendall Jenner and how this affected her business.

Sources and References:

All content does reflect what the cited sources are saying. All links I checked do work and are up to date. All new content that has been added has been backed up by reliable sources!

Organization:

The content added is amazing, I think it is written very well and is accurate. I did not see any grammar or spelling errors for any of the new content added. All the new content is well organized, it all fits perfectly into the article and blends together very smoothly!

Images and Media:

The article only has one picture of Kendall Jenner from 2014. I think it relates to the topic but would be better to have a picture of Jenner in the advertisement to show the reader a glimpse of what the ad looked like. The image on Jenner is laid out in a visual appealing way. The image also follows Wikipedias copyright regulations.

Overall Impression:

I think this article is great so far! Some more information about Jenner and a new picture would tie it all together! I think it would be great to check out new information from the last 2 years and see if theres been any updated talk about the Pepsi ad. Overall super solid work and i'm excited to see the finished work! Everything you have added has been super relevant and flowed very well with the original article. Keep up the good work!