User:Ajpiece/Double Militancia/Dannyparsons6 Peer Review

General info
Ajpiece
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ajpiece/Double Militancia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft article on Double Militancia is a good start and with more information should be a great Wikipedia article. The article has a strong introduction that clearly introduces the topic. The article pays attention to the larger context of the term and where it comes from. The draft has 5 references, which are all from good sources. I thought the language was unbiased. Grammar and style were the biggest issues with the article. In the article I noticed a missing period, several comma splices, and a few awkward sounding sentences. However, after proofreading I have no doubt you will be able to fix these. There are no visual materials in the article, you should consider adding some. Other than that I thought this was a great draft and I am sure you will do well on your final submission.