User:Ajr1234/Punishment (psychology)/Jshelby9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Allyson Reynolds (Ajr1234)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ajr1234/Punishment (psychology) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was no lead article added so I am guessing you are still working on that! Under your Primary punishers, I would add more and also take out " (I am unclear what the asterisks means?)". If you are unsure how to reword/ I would just completely delete and find a different source. Under connection with psychological disorders, I would take out the commentary and just redo that section/add your own sources.