User:Ajr1234/Punishment (psychology)/Pbary psych Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ajr1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Punishment (psychology)
 * Punishment (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you've added a lot of information regarding primary punishment which looks good! I noticed there is instructor feedback that should be addressed if you haven't already. Some areas I think you could look to expand and edit are:


 * The Secondary punishers
 * The article has a very long lead section I think it should be condensed or broken up.
 * You don't have any of your citations in the bibliography page, so it would be a good idea to put them in there.

Keep up the hard work!