User:Ajr1234/Punishment (psychology)/Thatbaddie205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Arj1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajr1234/Punishment_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Punishment (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Allyson!

The content that you added, I believe fit right into the places that you selected them to fit. The section under "Punishment in relation to kids" provided a good source of information. However I had a bit of a difficult time understanding certain points. For example, when you added "Also, techniques following a functional assessment lend to a reduction in CB 82.7% of the time while using techniques without knowledge of behavioral functions resulted in reduction of CB 77.3% of the time". That part in particular just needs a bit of tweaking as far as re-wording certain phrases. In the same section as well, be careful to not make the content sound like you are summarizing results of a research article, as well as tying back your points of the purpose of the article. You provided a great source of citations in your article, as well as creating a reference page for the citations as well. Overall, you did a great job of adding important and relevant information to the article.