User:Ak1849/Senaya language/Imandin408 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ak1849


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ak1849/Senaya language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Senaya language

Evaluate the drafted changes
What I liked about this article is how the lead brings up some points about the speakers of the Senaya language. I also believe that for the most part, the content given in the article has a purpose, and there is nothing here that feels like filler. Everything here is relevant to the subject of the article. However, I do feel that some facts brought up in the lead feel out of place. Maybe move some parts into other sections? I also do not like how some sections of the article has very little information, but I think over time there will be more added. I do believe the most important thing the author could do to improve this article is to just add more information to each section. Right now, the structure seems fine, there just is not enough backing up parts of it. It is the same issue with mine, there are some parts not complete, because it just needs more time.

When looking at the lead again, I like how it is written, and I feel like it gives the most important information with no redundancy. However, I think the last sentence of the lead is not neutral, which is not good for a Wikipedia article.

I think the structure for the most part is good, but I would put the Research section at the end, and have the Senaya culture section below the Origin, history and use today section.

Besides what I said about the last sentence in the lead, the article as a whole is neutral. There is nothing here that would convince me on one viewpoint or another. Any viewpoint that can be given looks like it has been given.

The sources in the article are from very good sources, so I have no doubt that once the article is mostly complete, that it will have good information! None of the sources seem biased, just ones that are focused on giving information about the Senaya language.

Overall a nice article, can't wait to see the finished result!