User:Akankaria/NCERT textbook controversies/RPshiesty Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Akankaria


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Akankaria/NCERT_textbook_controversies?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * NCERT textbook controversies

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything they added was relevant and nothing was particularly distracting.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The writing was neutral and flowed well with the writing that was already on the mainspace page. Nothing seems to be biased at all and it all worked well.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Not particularly, even though the topic is political, Akankaria kept the writing representative of both sides of the political argument.
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * The citations do work and the sources support Akankaria's claims.
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * The references are reliable and are from reliable and neutral sources.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?

Not particularly, everything seems to be recent.