User:Akashdeep Singh Brar/@earth/Sneha. .0529 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Akashdeep Singh Brar
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Akashdeep Singh Brar/@earth/Bibliography, User:Akashdeep Singh Brar/sandbox:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) @earth:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) According to me, Akashdeep singh has not updated the article to reflect the new content provided.

In-depth Analysis, Formatting, Publication dates and additional context should be there in order to provide the deep understanding of the cultural context.

There may be room for further refinement to enhance the depth of the article.