User:Akb2022/Evolution of the Sechuran Fox (Lycalopex sechurae)/Sterling222 Peer Review

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Akb2022


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 * User:Akb2022/Evolution of the Sechuran Fox (Lycalopex sechurae)


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Really cool article. I love reading about foxes. My suggestions were to maybe fill out the first paragraph more and use it to summarize the rest of the article. I think there are a few places where you could use some wiki links. In the third sentence, maybe write, "The Sechuran Fox is known by its common names (Sechura Desert Fox, Peruvian Desert Fox)" or "The Sechuran Fox is known by its common names: the Sechura Desert Fox and Peruvian Desert Fox" or something like that. There is a citation missing in the Ancestry section. There were also a couple things that could be further explained in the Timeline and Genetics sections. Overall great job! - EF