User:Akbugday/Climate change in algeria/HisanCahool Peer Review

This article is extremely well organized and a huge change from what is posted to normal wikipedia, you've done some very impressive work here. I am reading the agriculture section and wondering if there is any soil degradation contributing to decreasing yield and the need for more water on fields, like we've seen in many other MENA countries. If so, that could be a valuable part of the story to include and if not an interesting part to dive into. I am wondering also about any freshwater resources in Algeria, you talk about the rain shadow cast by the atlas mountains but I am curious if there is any surficial fresh water which comes in from these mountains or if the shadow blocks there from being enough water to create a functional watershed. If there is fresh water, is it salinating? If there is not, did there used to be?

I think the addition of a rising temperature section would also benefit what you're working on and the sections about water for agriculture and drinking. Talking about how rising temperatures would effect these things by rising evaporation etc is an important part of the story. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this article and am impressed by your organization and the depth to which you were able to dig into certain topics.HisanCahool (talk) 13:56, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

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