User:Akbugday/Climate change in egypt/Figaro2002 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Climate change in egypt Bingus2124, Glacier Ivy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Akbugday/Climate change in egypt
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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the lead of the article is strong and tells the reader what the article is about but i feel like there could be a more engaging hook. The content seems well organized and in-depth but i feel as if there are a few things missing, adding some examples or case studies to better illustrate the impact better. I Also feel as if the housing and health sections could be more in depth. The tone is very neutral and doesnt reveal the writers personal opinions.