User:Akbugday/Climate change in israel/Bingus2124 Peer Review

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M.K Jasper and Garlic78
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Akbugday/Climate change in israel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Climate change in Israel

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I do have a couple edits here but overall your article is so clear and so wildly well researched its brilliant. You guys have made an almost entirely perfect article, with a massive amount of sources, clear and unbiased writing, and tons of really helpful statistics and data points. It made for great reading even though its a wikipedia article. Here are a couple of edits:

- I think it is really important to include something on desalination in the water resources section as Israel is the leading nation in desalination processes worldwide. Furthermore 85% of their drinking water is achieved through this method, without accounting for this you guys are leaving a pretty big hole in your water resource section.

- small edit but you guys spelled al nakba "nabka"

- Another important thing missing from your article regarding history is the control and use of palestinian water resources by the Israeli government, as well as Israeli settlers. I think there are some good points on the article we read for class on waste plant infraustrucutre in west bank. Although these resources are technically not theirs they are using them. I know this is a difficult topic to write about especially right now without seeming biased, but it is very important because Israel-Palestine are inevitably tied historically and due to their current governmental structure also resource wise. It is also to add how these resources are used and exploited by settlers in west bank, but obviously do not go to deep as there will hopefully one day be an article on climate change in palestine that will include those details.

- Finally I think you guys could go a little more in depth with the economic effects of climate change, Israel is a massive tourist location not only for jewish people but people worldwide wanting to experience their beautiful beaches. This will certainly be impacted by rising sea levels, which you do mention. But I think your article could benefit greatly from adding some more info here.

Super super awesome job!