User:Akbugday/Climate change in israel/Diyala815 Peer Review

General info
Garlic78 and M.K. Jasper
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Akbugday/Climate change in israel
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate change in Israel:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead is updated to reflect the information added and offers a concise overview of the topics therein.

Content
All content is relevant and creates a well-rounded picture of climate change drivers and vulnerabilities in Israel. I am wondering if there is something to be expanded on in the history section, where the development of the country after 1948 may be able to be discussed in terms of sustainability (or a lack thereof). It would be good to see some info on Israel’s renewable energy projects.

Tone and balance
The tone and balance of this article remain neutral, allowing facts and takeaways to be delivered plainly. This is especially apparent in the history section.

Sources and references
Great use of sources, many journals cited, allowing for confidence in data. Some news sources are used, allowing for insights and perspectives from within the country.

Organization
All content is well-written, and the article flows nicely. I noticed just a few errors in spelling/syntax—worth a look over.

Images and media
Some images would be nice to complement the multi-sided description of climate change impacts. These could include graphical representations of Israel’s GHG input compared to the world average, predicted temp increases, images of public transport, protected ecosystems, and some examples of renewable energy projects.

Overall impressions
Overall, the authors have made some strong, substantive additions to the article. It flows well and is written with clear language. Some pictures and info on renewable energy would help polish off this edit!