User:Akbugday/Climate change in morocco/AstaSolilja Peer Review

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HisanCahool and Diyala815
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 * Climate change in Morocco

Lead
I think the lead is straightforward and good! Smartly not extending its length too much to take the average reader away from its context. It is correctly concise and highlights the right areas which give the reader an overview. I like the addition of a lot of data driven points, which help the validity of the lead paragraphs. I do think the lead should be gone over for common (simple fix) grammatical and structural errors, there are a few problems with prepositions, word choice and sentence structure. Rewrite the first sentence if possible for better clarity (this might just be a problem for me, not that serious)

Content
The content mentioned throughout the subheading is very pertinent to the overall topic of climate change is Morocco. The content is up to date. I really like the Government policies section, the mitigation and adaptation and the impacts on people. I like it all! Only things to add i would say is a section on socierty and culture and write a paragraph under the maps for temp. and weather changes. Otherwise awesome!

Tone and Balance
Tone is great not much to say here, only underrepresentation sections I would say are the GHG emission and what is causing the climate change and its impacts. I know this is gone over in Impacts sections a bit, but expand on exactly is pushing climate change (the actors, governmental, industry, etc.) could be of help. The tone is neutral and importantly doesn't force the reading into choosing a side at all.

Sources and References
Wonderful use of sources, diverse mix. I like the use of peer-reviewed journals, buffs the credibility of everything said. Only thing said would be to add a bit more to the impacts on people section, specfically the tourisma nd health impacts section. Lots of good current sources as well.

Organization
Well written yes, the spacing of paragraphs is good (maybe add a bit to impact on people and add a history section!). Add a society and culture section? The grammar is good, maybe do a close edit through it all, because I saw a good amount of structural errors that weren't grammatically wrong but could have used changing.

Image and Media
This is a great example of perfect images and media! Nothing else to say.

Overall Impressions
Wonderful wonderful job! There is some things that need to be added or edited, but otherwise this is so so good! Just remember to look at general phrasing and readability. I loved it!