User:Akbugday/Climate change in morocco/Figaro2002 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Akbugday, Diyala815, HisanCahool


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Akbugday/Climate change in morocco
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The intro of the article does a good job of setting the stage, giving readers an insight into the challenges posed by climate change in Morocco. However, it could use a more gripping hook to really draw readers in. The contentt is neatly structured and delves deep into various facets of climate change in the region. it would benifit from that real-world examples or case studies, allowing readers to truly connect with the issue. The housing and health issues section could be  expanded on these topics for a more comprehensive view. The tone remains neutral. Seems like the article isnt completly finished as well