User:Akeiah/Childbirth-related post-traumatic stress disorder/Care.03 Peer Review

General info
Akeiah
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Akeiah/Childbirth-related post-traumatic stress disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Childbirth-related post-traumatic stress disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Akeiah you have done a really great job with your proposed changes. The lead for this article was very strong to start, but I think bringing in aspects of PTSD, as you mentioned, will alter that slightly.
 * Overall your proposed changes are quite neutral. I think how you mention the positive experience birth is meant to be and how it can affect many parents view points on birth, especially a traumatic one. That is a really strong point that brings in the severity of the topic while also advocating for parents that may not be experiencing it yet want to perform research.
 * Content wise, I am glad you will be updating the article from 2012 to now. With the newer research having come out in the recent 3 years, you should have plenty more to add to this article. I think your current statements on the article will relate and be easily changed or updated regarding new research.
 * So far the sources of your article work well, and the one you added is up to date with current research which is great.
 * Obviously, you are still working on your article, but as I said, I think the extra research and relation/difference to PTSD is going to add a lot to this article.
 * So far the sources of your article work well, and the one you added is up to date with current research which is great.
 * Obviously, you are still working on your article, but as I said, I think the extra research and relation/difference to PTSD is going to add a lot to this article.
 * Obviously, you are still working on your article, but as I said, I think the extra research and relation/difference to PTSD is going to add a lot to this article.
 * Obviously, you are still working on your article, but as I said, I think the extra research and relation/difference to PTSD is going to add a lot to this article.