User:Akornowski/Nelly Hanna/Skylily19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Akornowski


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Akornowski/Nelly_Hanna?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything in this article is appropriately centered on Nelly Hanna. However, I do notice that a thought in the "Career" heading was not finished. This was slightly distracting. There are also a few grammatical errors such as "Hanna's opinions has disrupted the historical world with her viewpoints, never having previously been discussed." where have would be a better word to place here. This sentence is also a claim. Neutrality is not kept in this claim. A way to provide neutrality to this claim would be to change the wording of the sentence to something like "Hanna's opinions have changed the way that the historical world is viewed."

I do not see anything that is underrepresented or overrepresented. I think there is a good balance here. The citations are also accurate. The author of this article has done a great job transferring over information into the article without plagiarizing. Claims and facts are supported by appropriate and reliable references and there does not seem to be anything out of date right now.