User:Akrovan/Environmental Concerns of Tren Maya/Laston53 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Akrovan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Akrovan/Environmental_Concerns_of_Tren_Maya?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Akrovan/Environmental_Concerns_of_Tren_Maya?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
some sources are not cited/ cited through wikipedia

some of the final paragraphs of a section seems opinionated, but may be neutral enough not to cause any issues

each section has a good amount of information and detail

introduction is clear and concise

you could add some wikipedia links on certain words to make information easily accessible while reading the article

final conclusion may not be necessary and may be slightly opinionated but could be ok

in fragmented section, many sentences start with "this". Maybe consider rewriting the beginning of the sentences so it is not so repetitive

different pros and cons have been addressed clearly

could add more potential statistics if available

add some visuals/pictures

All sections are relevant to topic

Overall, really well written with a lot of detail. Great job!!