User:Aksajikian/Fistulectomy/Dingsanity Peer Review

General info
Andre Ksajikian's work!
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Please search "fistulectomy" in wiki.
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Andre provided me with a word document to the draft of his fistulectomy wikipedia article.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Consider the following structure, drawing from your notes:


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) * The article does a nice job of organizing the clinical details of a fistulectomy.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) * I would suggest inserting an image or two for the reader to be visually drawn to read the article. I would also encourage more details about how to prevent fistulas from occurring.
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) * A simple
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!
 * 8) * I liked the overall flow of the article.