User:Akshita.j/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Pokémon Black and White

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because it is of interest to me. Pokémon Black/White is my favorite installment of the Pokémon video game series. I got to this article as I was looking through some WikiProjects links. It is also something I have some kind of knowledge about, so it seemed like a good choice for evaluation.

Lead Section
The lead section of this article is strong as it introduces the game concisely and provides a short summary of all of the points that follow.

Content
The article's content is relevant to the topic. It focuses on this game specifically and talks about its storyline, gameplay and features, as well as how it was received by the public. The content is up to date and it seems to cover everything important.

Tone and Balance
The article is written in a neutral tone. There is no biased language used to describe anything regarding the game. The article simply describes the game.

Sources and References
This article is about a video game, so there aren't any scholarly articles to use for it. The references are good though because a good amount of them come from the official Pokémon company and Nintendo, which are the most reliable sources in this case.

Organization and Writing Quality
The article is easy to read and understand. I did not catch any grammatical or spelling errors. It is very well broken down into the game's most important categories. I feel that the editors of the article were very thorough yet concise with their writing.

Images and Media
The article does include a screenshot from the game when talking about the C-Gear specifically, as well as location photos to show the inspiration of certain places in the game. The images are explained well in the captions.

Talk Page Discussion
Looking at the talk page showed me how a Wikipedia article can come to be. I saw many suggestions and edits. The main thing that stood out to me was the talk about moving information about Black 2 and White 2, the follow-up to Black and White, to a separate Wikipedia article, which made a lot of sense to me as well. The comments are from years ago and there isn't anything too recent. It seems that the article stands well now.

Overall Impressions
Overall, the article is well done. It is very consistent, concise, and it goes over everything that is important to the game. The only part that I felt was lacking was the short section about music. I think it could be expanded just a little bit, but everything else was good. I feel that the article is very well developed.