User:Al1cant3/Sandbox

I'm not new to the Wikipedia website. However, I am a new member and I am new to editing articles and such on Wikipedia.

The article of my main focus, here on Wikipedia, is the "Wizard101" article (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wizard101). Wizard101 is an online multiplayer role-playing game created by the company KingsIsle Entertainment. I love this game and I love playing this game! This game is my new passion. :-) Until a few days ago, I was not aware that there was a Wikipedia article about this game.  When I read through the Wizard101 article, I noticed a mistake or two that I felt needed to be corrected.  I wasn't sure if it was my place to correct it or not, or if I needed to contact someone to point out this mistake to.  Needless to say I started reading about Wikipedia, the rules of how to edit and etc. on Wikipedia, and learning about different ways to use Wikipedia.  I am still learning, and I know that I will always learn something new about Wikipedia and the best way (or ways) to edit and improve articles.

SANDBOX: In my opinion, the sandboxes are important and very helpful to new Wiki members and/or anonymous editors! I believe that Wiki "noobs" should work with the sandboxes to practice their edits and to practice new techniques (techniques new to them) before editing someone's article. Until today, I did not know that each user is provided with their own Sandbox. How cool is that!? :-D Well, I think it is a great idea! That being said, this is the Sandbox I plan to practice my edits and such the most before editing an article here on Wikipedia. This is my first "User:Alcant3/Sandbox" submission. Thank you! :-)

PRACTICE: Italicizing a word.

Italicized: Italicize this phrase.

Results in "Show preview": SUCCESS! :-)

PRACTICE: Bold facing a word.

Bold: Bold face this phrase.

Results in "Show preview": SUCCESS! :-)

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"Wizard101" article

Revision: Attempt to improve a recent edit to the Wizard101 article

you may be wondering, is this game worth playing, well read this... INTRODUCTION ''At the beginning the player controls a novice wizard, who is named something that you chose at the beginning of the game, that wizard joins the Ravenwood School of Magical Arts, a school of wizardry located in a fictional town called Wizard City.[6] Instead of the traditional character classes, Wizard101 offers the players a choice among seven different "magic schools" (Fire, Ice, Storm, Life, Death, Myth and Balance) which will influence character development and parts of the magical spells (in form of collectible cards) available to the player in combat.

''In Wizard101, the different areas accessible to players are referred to as "worlds". Upon character creation, only Wizard City is opened to access. As the player progresses, more worlds become accessible.''

There are definitely grammatical errors in this entry. First of all, the first letter of the word "you" in the first sentence isn't capitalized. Second, there isn't a gap between "INTRODUCTION" and the beginning of the paragraph starting with "At the beginning the player...", and the way that the anonymous "editor" changed the layout makes it look a little choppy. Third, when the "editor" made these changes it affected and altered how the "Contents" were set up. So.....

1) Should I simply undo the changes this person made?

OR

2) Should I tweek it to make it look less choppy, basically keeping the intention of the revision (mostly) the same?

'You may be wondering: "Is this game worth playing?"

If you are asking yourself this, continue reading this article to find out if playing this game is worth your time.